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@@ -90,19 +90,19 @@ We spent a while searching for some lights we liked, we eventually settled for l
 
 Prettier radiators. Plumber man recommended by Simon so we will probably try to use them in future rather than our nightmare boiler people.
 
-We went with the same people to do the carpet as with the lower hallway. Bit of a mixup with the whipping. Nice to walk on, squishy underlay. Looks good but smells a bit funny.
+We went with the same people to do the carpet as with the lower hallway. Bit of a mixup with the whipping so we got a partial refund. Nice to walk on, squishy underlay. Looks good but new carpet smells a bit funny. They managed to get all the carpet done in one day, except for 6 steps which they had to return another day to finish off.
 
 <Cards images={[
     {title: "Carpet!", src: s("carpet-during-2.jpg")},
     {title: "The sorts of decisions you have to make", src: s("carpet-2.jpg")},
 ]} />
 
-<Cards images={[
-    {title: "Looks lovely", src: s("hall-done-1.jpg")},
-]} />
 
 We think it looks so smart and beautiful but currently very bare and impersonal. It is a blank canvas on which to add photos, pictures and knick-knacks - which we are bad at getting around to putting up.
 
+<Cards images={[
+    {title: "Looks lovely", src: s("hall-done-1.jpg")},
+]} />
 
 ## Garden
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ Since getting some gardeners to help cut back the overgrowth, we have had them b
 
 <Cards images={[
     {title: "Getting plants home", src: s("plants-transport1.jpg")},
-    {title: "With extra danger", src: s("plants-transport2.jpg")},
+    {title: "Fits in the car?", src: s("plants-transport2.jpg")},
 ]} />
 
 
@@ -152,10 +152,16 @@ Well, we are delighted to announce we actually did order one. It was made to ord
 
 <Solocard title="Shoe bench!" src={s("shoerack.jpg")} />
 
-Woohoo bench. Very useful to sit on to put shoes on. It is very long, can fit many shoes and has a little basket with spare slippers that our visitors can use.
+Woohoo finally. It is very useful to sit on to put shoes on. It is very long, can fit many shoes and has a little basket with spare slippers that our visitors can use.
 
 Ozzy still picks his shoes up and goes upstairs to put his shoes on. Habits are hard to break.
 
+## Tusks
+
+The 3d printer has come in clutch many times during our house renovation - see the wifi backbox (link?) - but it also has uses for the frivolous. On the list of prints has been proper tusks for our elephant toilet who has been dealing with split ends for a long time.
+
+<Solocard title="Printing" src={s("tusks.jpg")} />
+
 
 ## Kayaks
 
@@ -167,13 +173,13 @@ Second off: Inflatable kayaks are a little wider than normal kayaks and don't tr
 
 Third off: we saw these awesome looking origami kayaks and we couldn't stop wanting to get one. We would go through repeated phases of 'can't justify the price', 'do we use the kayak enough', 'let's not buy them', 'they look so cool though'.
 
-So we bought some anyway with our personal 'Fun Money' that we allow ourselves out of our monthly income.
+So we bought some anyway with our personal fun money.
 
 
 <Cards images={[
     {title: "Down", src: s("kayak-down.jpg")},
     {title: "Up", src: s("kayak-up.jpg")},
-    {title: "Pub", src: s("kayak-pub.jpg")},
+    {title: "Pub on the river", src: s("kayak-pub.jpg")},
 ]} />
 
 
@@ -184,6 +190,9 @@ This also means we have a spare inflatable tandem kayak if anyone wants to come
 
 
 
+
+
+
 - new tusks
   - Cost/benefit analysis of 3d printer